Beta Readers, It’s About the Book – Not You

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by Ashleigh Giannoccaro

For me over the last five (now six) books my beta team has proved to be one the most valuable resources. Sometimes we need that unbiased opinion to separate us from our ‘book babies’ so we can see the faults. These are often the first eyes on your work and they give their time and effort to help you make it better. I want my beta team to rip it to shreds so I can sew it all back together better in the end. It’s not about me, it is about putting out the best book possible.

 

What I look for in a beta reader.

  • Honesty without fear
  • Good grasp of grammar spelling and the English language
  • A love of the genre I write

 

What I want my beta to do for me.

I ask them to answer these questions first and foremost

  • Does the opening grab me – does it make me want to read on?
  • Does the story begin at the right place? (might seem trivial but I think it’s very valid)
  • Are the characters compelling? Do I get a good sense of who they are
  • Are the secondary characters well rounded (can’t tell you how many books I’ve read where the secondary character has held my interest more than the main)
  • Is there internal and external conflict for the main character?
  • Are those conflicts believable?
  • Is the premise for those conflicts cliche? Tired? Been used 1000 times before?
  • Are the plot twists believable?
  • Do the characters respond to those adversities in a believable way?
  • How’s the story paced? Any parts that drag? Any parts you would like to see fleshed out?
  • Are the settings enough to give me a sense of time and place?
  • Am I telling any parts as opposed to showing?
  • How is the overall feel of the work? Fresh? Inspiring to read? Is the content trigger worthy?
  • What are your favourite parts and why?
  • What are three things that worked best for you?
  • What are three things that didn’t work for you?

 

Then I ask for comments and corrections to be made on the google document we share as beta group so that all feedback is in one place making edits and rewrites easier.

 

What my betas expect from me

  • A clear deadline
  • The best version of my work possible at that stage of drafting.
  • Open communication without being hurt, offended, upset or whiny if they don’t like what they read they don’t have to like it they do have to tell me why they don’t
  • Respect of their time and effort, consider all their comments and feedback equally

 

Things I DON’T want from a beta

  • Don’t just say it was wonderful I wouldn’t change anything
  • Don’t tell me you loved it to spare my feelings
  • Do not rip my heart out – if you hated it tell me nicely
  • Do not share my work with anyone else (I have an NDA in place and think all authors should)

 

Is your work ready for BETA?

When is the right time?

  • Is the story complete?
  • Have you done at least one round of self editing and rewrites?
  • Have you used spell check?
  • Yes to all of these? Read it again then send it.

 

Beta reading is a step to me that cannot be skipped in the writing process, it can make the difference between a good book and a best seller. Bland can become phenomenal if you work at it enough with the right team. Build your tribe wisely, seek betas in reading groups and writing groups where people are like minded and supportive. You might go through a tray full of rotten apples before you find the ones that you can work best with, and that’s okay! Once you find a team of good beta readers, hang onto them, treat them like gold and they will continue to be the most valuable part of your tribe.

I hope this insight can be useful to other authors trying to build their own tribe, or even just refining their beta process. I believe if we share our knowledge we can all grow stronger together.
**This is my experience and advice and is in no way the gospel on this subject.

 

 

 

 

Bestselling Author Ashleigh Giannoccaro writes edgy, dark romance and erotic horror. Self published by choice, she writes the stories others don’t dare. Currently residing in Johannesburg, South Africa with her husband and two daughters, Ashleigh enjoys writing stories that make you fall in love with the unlovable and leave you asking questions. When not writing, she can be found with her kindle in a sunny spot reading or traveling with her family.


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20 thoughts on “Beta Readers, It’s About the Book – Not You”

  1. Is it wrong for me to want my book babies torn apart at the seams? I have a ravenous appetite for unadulterated honesty to the point if someone likes something I wrote, I think they’re lying. Maybe I was dropped on my head as a baby. I’m actually more sensitive over grammatical errors than everything else. I am obsessed with that. Am I normal or psychotic? Signed, Stil Suspious of my Beta Reader.

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    1. I’m 100% with you! I was really frustrated with my beta readers last time around because I got almost no critical feedback. I handed my book over to a guy at lunch a month later and the first thing he said was, “Your plot is cliche. Get rid of the first page and start it on the second.” He made a HUGE difference in 10 minutes. I don’t want nice, I want feedback.

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  2. Reblogged this on PTL Perrin Writes… and commented:
    I love this checklist for Beta Readers, and for me as an author! Thank you, Ashleigh Giannoccaro!

    If you’re one of my Beta Readers, this should make it easier for you. I really do want your honest feedback. I promise I won’t cry too much. The blotchy look doesn’t look good with my blue hair.

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  3. I had three main beta readers for my first book, just finished in July. My boyfriend: loved everything but made some good suggestions for tweaks. My son: had fresh ideas for changes to make it more compelling. My son-in-law: most brutal! And most helpful! Go figure, huh? 🙂

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