by Writer in Wedges
So you have written your short story and cannot wait to release it into the world. But before doing that, it is important to take some extra time to make sure your story is properly edited, despite the fact that editing is nowhere near as fun as writing.
- Spell/Grammar CheckThe first step towards the best version of your story is hitting that spellcheck button and proofreading it to make sure there are no errors. A story which contains spelling and/or grammar mistakes very often won’t be taken seriously.
- Remove Adjectives/AdverbsSometimes, less is more, and this is especially true when it comes to adjectives and adverbs. Too much of either can suffocate your story. Instead, opt for using a stronger verb or a noun.
- Remove RepetitionThis is very important to keep your readers’ attention. If you catch yourself repeating the same thing several times throughout the story, you know what to do.
- Remove ClichesCliches are a deadly sin of fiction writing. Avoid them at all costs.
- Begin with a BangIf you explain too much at the beginning of your story (if you “tell” instead of “show”), your beginning might not be as effective as it would be if you jumped straight into action. Mind you, this “action” does not have to be your characters running away from zombies (but hey, I’m not judging), however, if you begin your story with a lengthy description of the weather, many readers might get bored and abandon the story altogether.
- Check For ConsistencyMake sure your writing is consistent in every way. This can refer to either checking that the names of your characters are consistent throughout the story, or that their motivation corresponds to their actions. The story has to follow the rules of logic (except when its primary purpose is to twist those rules).
- Remove Unnecessary ExplanationI cannot stress this enough. Just like long beginnings, explanations are often a lazy way out which indicates that an author couldn’t be bothered to write a scene in which s/he would show something instead of telling it. Let’s face it: explanations are boring. There are many things about the characters that the writer has to know, that never make it to the final version of the story. There’s nothing wrong with that. Make sure the readers know only what they really, really have to know in order to follow your story.
- Edit Your DialogueDialogue is essentially a conversation where the boring parts have been left out. Make sure that your dialogue truly reveals only the necessary information for the story, and cut all those random chats that do not move the story forward.
- Get PerspectiveOkay, so you have made sure that your short story does not have any repetition, cliches, or unnecessary explanation. Now what? The best thing you can do is to leave your story alone and come back to it with fresh eyes. You can leave it for one day, or a couple of weeks, depending on your schedule or personal preference. However, I find this step very important because it allows you to gain some perspective and to see the possible shortcomings of the story more easily.
- Get FeedbackGive the story to your beta readers. They can be members of your creative writing workshop, your family or friends. In any case, they should be people you consider honest and trustworthy, and preferably experienced readers. It is better to have several opinions than only one. However, take their advice with a grain of salt: even though their feedback can be very useful, remember that you are still the author and at the end of the day should do what feels right to you instead of listening to others.
Guest post contributed by the creator of Writer in Wedges. She graduated in English and Italian language and literature. She is the editor of Split Mind, a magazine dedicated to literature and culture. She has published poetry and short fiction in magazines, collections and online.
These are some good tips to follow. Thank you.
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Thanks for reading, G.R.
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Excellent! Sharing on m blog https://www.4writersandreaders.com
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Don’t miss these great writing/editing tips! ~ Bette A. Stevens, Maine author/illustrator http://www.4writersandreaders.com
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Some great tips there. Will share 🙂
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Thanks for sharing it, Suzanna.
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Good advice in those ten tips. Never rush your writing. Put it aside and then come back to it with fresh eyes and perspective. Edit, edit and edit some more.
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Feedback is a great thing to have. My Creative Writing class in college (the second one I took for my minor, preceded by Expository Writing) had us get feedback for one of our stories from other members of the class.
When I read the feedback that one guy gave me, I blushed. It wasn’t mean; he was actually a very nice person. But what he had written on the page was direct and honest. As such, the story improved. There is a lot of value in listening to your early readers.
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Another page that I’ve bookmarked. It’s so useful having a list of steps to follow when editing.
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Thanks for reading, Lilly.
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Great tips!! Nice and tight, right to the point . I’ll be using these to recheck, etc. ad nauseum, my short stories.
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“Dialogue is…a conversation where the boring parts have been left out.” Best definition of dialogue I have ever come across.
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Agreed, what a wonderfully brief but accurate description of dialog.
I can see each of these 10 points being expanded into subsequent posts like, “10 clichés to avoid,” or “7 Tips to Better Dialog” (I’ve done that last one).
Of course #’s 9 & 10 are extremely important. One always needs fresh eyes and differing perspectives.
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Very important to get fresh perspective. Whenever I set aside a story or script for a period of time, I always see new things when I look at it again.
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I like to set a new work down and then “fuhgeddabowdit” for a few weeks too.
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Excellent tips! Thanks for sharing.
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Here are some great tips on short story editing from Ryan Lanz’s blog
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Great tips! 🙂
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Thanks for reading OM! You have a great blog, yourself.
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You are very kind! Thank you!
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Succinctly written! Very useful for anyone, especially for someone just starting out like me.
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Guilty of doing no. 2! Thanks for this 🙂
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Some excellent points you’ve put up here. I generally try to keep most of these in mind but getting them all at one place and going through them was an enriching experience.
Thanks for a lovely post. 😊
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Great post am not sure I can wait!
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I pretty much agree with all of the tips except one: If used properly, adjectives and, to a lesser degree, adverbs can make for a more interesting story. After all, if we didn’t need adjectives and adverbs, why did we invent them? LOL 🙂
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Thanks for the reblog!
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Really good read! Very useful, as I’ve started writing stories and it’s a lot harder than it seems! But this really helped in my latest story!
Thank you! 🙂
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Awesome advice. Thank you! You should check my short stories and tell me what you think. I could always use the feedback.
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Wanted to pass along a solid list of tips for those of us editing short stories. This is from theryanlanz of A Writer’s Path, a great all-around resource.
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