Category Archives: Under the Microscope

Under the Microscope: Crossing at a Walk

 

Welcome back to the Under the Microscope series. In this post, we’ll read an excerpt of a story, see what works and what doesn’t, and look at ways to improve it.

How it works: an author submits an excerpt from the beginning of one of their stories, with the understanding that I’ll publicly critique it. I give the excerpt a manuscript critique and post it.

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Under the Microscope – A Raven’s Revenge

 

Welcome back to another post in the Under the Microscope series. It’s been a while. Some of you who have been following this website for years will remember these.

How it works is that an author submits an excerpt from the beginning of one of their stories, with the understanding that I’ll publicly critique it. I give the excerpt a manuscript critique and post it.

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