Under the Microscope: Dear Master

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Under the Microscope is the type of post where we dive into the first section of a story to dig out the nuts and bolts. The idea is to provide a learning experience based on the critiques and compliments that occur as a result. This is not meant to be taken as a traditional critique, and all comments are based on my personal opinion.

If you’d like to submit a story for a future episode, head to the UtM submission page.

You can find last week’s episode here.

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