The Power of Positive Writing


by Jacqui Murray 


Have you ever read a book and found yourself feeling depressed or angry, or maybe just fidgety as you read? You might blame it on the tension and growing crises that are part and parcel to a developing plot, but then why does your subconscious keep pushing you to take a break? A good book is a page-turner. You can’t put it down. So what is it about this one that has you tapping your fingers even during the chase scene?

One reason: It’s just too negative. Bear with me–I know good stories have lots of angst as characters try to grow and find themselves and the good guys claw away at saving the world. What these good stories don’t do is wrap this tension in a negative tone.

Tone in writing can be defined as attitude or emotion toward the subject and the reader. It conveys a particular message from the writer to the reader that while life is chock full of problems, there’s always hope. The story’s protagonist may fall, but s/he’ll get up. The addiction in a good story is how life’s unsolvable problems are defeated by a motivated main character whose core principles, motivations, and morality are just like yours. If the story’s tone turns negative, it quickly becomes pedantic, as though the writer is superior to the reader, lecturing because the audience is dumb. No one likes to be around that sort of person, much less choose to read a book that makes you feel that way. A positive tone, even as the world crumbles, conveys hope that this flawed, Everyman character is going to find his way out.

I hear you–you don’t believe you do that. Here’s a quick test. Search a chapter of your manuscript (use the Alt+F4 Find shortkey) for ‘not’ and all variations of that (including contractions). Every time possible, switch the negative for a positive. For example, instead of:

‘She couldn’t run anymore’

rewrite as

‘Throat rasping,  she screeched to a slow stumble’.

Instead of

‘She couldn’t see out the window’

rewrite as

‘All she saw was the grimy dirt of a window that had gone years without a wash’.

Unless you’re in Britain, replace

‘I don’t suppose you’d be so kind as to…’


‘Please’ or ‘Get over here!’

When you’ve switched as many as you can, re-read your manuscript. Does it sound more powerful? More engaging? Now go through your entire manuscript like that. Sure, you’ll skip some–they’ll need to be negative–but as many as 70% can be switched. That will make the negative parts more striking rather than tonally depressing more striking.




Guest post contributed by Jacqui Murray. Jacqui is the author of the popular Building a Midshipman, the story of her daughter’s journey from high school to United States Naval Academy. She is the author/editor of dozens of books on integrating tech into education, an Amazon Vine Voice book reviewer, a columnist for and TeachHUB, and Editorial Review Board member for Journal for Computing Teachers. You can find her book at her publisher’s website, Structured Learning.  

26 thoughts on “The Power of Positive Writing

  1. Great editing tip. I went to a conference once for adding comedy and one of the authors (sorry cant remember) said write it out, then go back and edit to add in ‘Words that sound funny’. First draft was funny but 2nd draft was hysterical just because words like “laugh” were changed to “cackle” or words like “dull” became “feeble” or “witless”. Thanks for the tip.

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  2. That is a good editing tip. Funny reading this when I just finished 1984 yesterday. I couldn’t wait to have it overwith when I got three quarters of the way through, for some of the points you make here. My quick review with spoilers is on Goodreads.


  3. These are helpful tips. Thanks for the tips. But I have one question. I just started my blog, so how do I put a piece of writing under a certain category? For example, it I have a page that says healthy eating and I wrote a piece about healthy eating, how do I put it in there?


  4. I feel that negative stuff is part of the human condition… not all protagonists are struggling towards the light and not all plots end well. Not all books are easy to read but maybe some are worth reading anyway.. kind of like life.


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