Why Query Letters and Synopses Are So Hard to Write (And How to Get Through it)

 

by Lauren Sapala

 

When I was in college I took a class called Fantasy Literature, which I thought would be nothing but fun and actually turned out to be a lot of hard work. On the first day of class, our professor told us that we would be reading one book a week, and a paper on that book would be due every Monday. The class collectively groaned, until he smiled and said our papers only needed to be one page long. Then we all cheered. And that’s when he got this wicked little smile on his face.

“Don’t worry,” he said. “That one page will be more work than writing ten.”

I didn’t at all understand what he meant, until I tried to write my first one-page paper. I’d had no problem chewing my way through the 300-page story, but now that I had to find a primary theme, explain it, give at least one example to back it up and tie the whole thing together with wit and verve—and all in one page—I would have paid good money to find somebody else, anybody else, to do it for me.

By the time I got through that one page I understood my professor’s wicked smile, I felt like I had earned some serious writing chops, and I was filled with dread for the next coming Monday.

I ended up writing twelve of these monstrous little one-page papers and by the end of the semester I had gone through my writing trial by fire. I put that period of my life behind me forever and moved on, confident that I would never have to undergo such an ordeal ever again.

And then I was ready to send out queries for my first novel, and it all came flooding back.

Writing a query letter and/or synopsis is probably one of the hardest tasks that writers have to accomplish. And you can rest assured, it’s not just you—you’re not a defective writer—it really is that  difficult. No one likes doing it. Most of us end up a) in tears b) pissed off or c) binge eating chocolate chip cookies and rage cleaning our house in a last-ditch effort at procrastination.

The first step to getting through it is to know that you have to get through it. It totally sucks, but you have to get through it. And you will get through it. This beast can be tamed. If you’ve written a novel made up hundreds of pages, thousands of lines of words all strung together, you can get through writing your query letter and synopsis. Again, it sucks. But you can do it.

The second step is to sit down and write, and write as if your page limit is much higher than it actually is. For example, if you’re trying to write a one-page synopsis, start by writing five to seven pages of summary. Then call on your inner editor and start carving it down. Be ruthless. Do you really need that paragraph that goes into your supporting character’s back story? No. Cut it. Do you absolutely have to have three paragraphs at the beginning to set the stage? No. Get to the point. Who is your protagonist, what is his conflict, what choice does he have to make and what does he decide. Keep your eyes on these four targets and aim to hit all of them, with precision and economy of words.

The third step depends on if you’re going for a one-page, or a three-page synopsis (these two page-lengths for synopses are the most commonly requested by agents). If you’re going for one page, keep carving. Shave it, shave it, and shave it some more. If you’ve got the luxury of three pages, start looking at your plot points as they show up in the summary. Where can you add in some sparkle and flash? If a love interest appears, don’t just say that these two people meet each other. Mention the heat between them, the magnetic chemistry they share. If violence comes into play, use vibrant language that will briefly paint the scene.

Years and years ago I worked at an Applebee’s restaurant right outside Seattle, WA. One of the cheesier things I learned was how to incorporate “sizzle” words into my description of a meal when trying to upsell the customer. The fajitas were “mouth-watering.” The chocolate pie was “creamy and delicious.” And it is  cheesy, but it also works. The human brain latches onto language that gives us a clear image, a strong emotion, or a sensual attraction toward something.

You want your agent to immediately get the bare-bones summary of your characters and plot, while also nudging them to consider actually ordering  your mouth-watering manuscript.

 

 

 

Guest post contributed by Lauren Sapala. Lauren is a writing coach who specializes in personal growth and artistic development for introverted intuitive writers. She is the author of The INFJ Writer and currently blogs on writing, creativity and personality theory at www.laurensapala.com. She lives in San Francisco.

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12 thoughts on “Why Query Letters and Synopses Are So Hard to Write (And How to Get Through it)”

  1. This is what I am battling at the moment. Edit wise, i think my novel is close to submission stage, but writing the synopsis is draining me! I have a one page draft at the moment, but lots of people seem to suggest 500 words. If the agent doesn’t offer a preference, will more than 500 words be okay? My one page is at around 650 words.

    There are great tips, advice and encouragement in this post – thank you!

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  2. I am a newbie and am preparing intros for self publishing, which I think is on par with your one page book report. You want to entice them to want to find out what happened, and that is a lot harder than writing the whole darn book. Thanks for the information.

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  3. These are really great tips! I don’t think I’ve ever heard of writing more than you have to and then cutting it down to one page. I’m definitely going to have to try that tip when I dive into querying. 🙂

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  4. I always tend to write short – having often been accused of writing a great beginning and ending, but where’s the middle? So I don’t have as much of a problem writing synopses and queries… there isn’t as much to shave as there might be for those who write long. The trick is in making the thing enticing. I’m working on it!

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